All Comments on 'I Had Anal Sex With A Man'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i love it when the women let them come in there asses

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WHAT???

you need a course in third grade English.....

oldmushroomoldmushroomabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I am glad you liked it , sure I am forwarding it to you for good editting.

dpattjr42dpattjr42about 10 years ago
a nice plot, ruined by poor grammar

i'm not sure if english is your second language but you would benefit greatly from a proofreader looking over your work. hell, i would offer to help if you wanted it. better grammar would have made this story great!

FeyadFeyadabout 10 years ago
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Nice story, but hard to read. You need someone to read it for editing and grammar.

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