by Ashson
Sounds like a fantasy of a boy scout contemplating his first camping trip. With girl scouts.
HA
I had that dream back in the 9th grade... and Man I do like to think back on the couple of times
You are on a roll Ashson! Your LW stories are bright and cheerful and always a pleasure to read. No matter the plot, the wives always come out on top and happy if in an odd way.
This is a clueless husband stroke story and nothing other . Something I am curiouse about this pair is the next: How will they live their life in the next 5-10-15-20 years or they will belong to the 50% divorced pairs? SUCH AUTHORS WHY DOES NOT WRITE THE FUTURE OF THIS PAIR? Against the cuckold stories these sort of story good idea factory for revenge story authors, as I am!
the husband was right, his wife was not to be trusted. she is just a slut and
the ranger is just a man whore. both are trash just like this tale
The story covers LESS than 24 hours of a couple's life! And it is FICTION. (And, Duna the Revenge Fiend, the Ranger Bull seems to out-GUN her Hubby - hehehe)
It is a cute story. Yes, either Hubby was just naturally paranoid OR there is prior evidence (or indication) that Sweetie is 'adventuresome!' Of course, the good news is that Hubby can NO LONGER be accused of paranoia.
My only quibble is that our intrepid Ranger Bull should have brought some jelly donuts and more coffee - and maybe a couple of Wipies! Or they could have traded old-fashioned, lo-tech, non-litter clean-ups!!!
... that's all it is.
Why people like DUNA want all the loose threads in the lives of fictional characters introduced in a 2500 word short story neatly tied up ( the ending has to include the casting off into the darkness of the straying wife) beats me. I would guess that the author wouldn't object it DUNA picked up the thread (the wife who doesn't like to camp does like to fuck, and the ranger was handy) and carried it out to the proper BTB conclusion
to the complainers. I haven't bothered to see how few stories they wrote, but i like this one. Good work, and there is nothing hotter than a secretly unfaithful wife. Keep it going, especially when the husband is a jerk. Sort of like the discontents here.
@ H.H.Morant A similar short (some months time) background stories were my story ideas for my stories wich I published on storiesonline.net. I like these type clueless husband stories, because it is good raw material source (goldmine) for revenge stories foundation.
"The Two Wimps" story's source is a clueless husband story where the wife did sex with her daughter's bend. I read here on Loving Wives.............
I hate the cuckold stories, because it is not good raw material for revenge story. However I have a revenge story plan, where a cuckold married pair will be the background of the revenge story(I plan for next year.............).
@ H.H. Moran I am sorry for my mistake I have not editor........"The Two Wimps" story's source is a clueless husband story where the wife did sex with her daughter's boyfriend. I read here on Loving Wives.............
There is nothing more pathetic than a man sitting home jerking off to a secretly unfaithful wife!
Everyone needs a skank slut wife to make life wonderful, are you fucking kidding me!
Ignore the usual Anon comments - good short story. Look forward to more
The cocksucker thinks he's the only one allowed an opinion. Grow up asshole.
Loved the start as it coincided with our own fantasies. I sure hope there will be more chapters to go with this.