All Comments on 'I Hate Goodbye Ch. 01'

Gave it a 5!

Good start. Can't wait to read more.

I can't wait for more, they make a beautiful couple.

Just one quick coment about the last para (which doesn't really matter, but just to be pedantic!) baggage reclaim in England happens before the traveller comes out of arrivals; Mari would already have her luggage with her.

Truly enjoyed the male pov and story line? Please write more.

Please, please, please move him to the London office. Nothing could be better.

thank you for the feedback; it is a pleasure to write a story that encourages and is hopeful...and 'pedantism' is good too; I hope you'll continue to read; I know this isn't everyone's flavor and that's okay with me; please know your comments are appreciated

I truly enjoyed this read! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Best regards,

Temptress Zee~

I just love everything about this story. The characters are so likable and I love the male pov. Everything about this is perfect.