All Comments on 'I Hate Miles Bonn'

Great story. Frustrating that she couldn’t see him for what he was, but that’s the story. Wouldn’t be good otherwise! 5*

Lovely, believable, beautiful story. 5*

Fun read and I loved the tongue-in-cheek style. 4.7*

The plot was well developed and its timeline kept the suspense. Thank you for sharing the story.

I like how you worked in the personality trait that she was not able to conceive that his criticism was intended to help. There are people like that. There are also people who actually do love to cut other people down. Luckily for the mc, he wasn’t one of them.

It must be deep winter on the pct already. Awful main characters. She is neurotic, insecure and definitely unfit for any management position, while he is as deep as a puddle in a drought. I usually like your stories but this one i.m.h.o. does not meet your usually high quality. Despite that, thank you for giving us your stories.

Fucking other guys isn't romantic, at all.

Wonderful story, would make a great hallmark film, of course it would have to be watered down and no sex, but the confusion, the internal struggle and the love would all work well on screen, especially if the right actors brought the characters to life.

Thank you for another wonderful romance story. 5*****

In the end, the guy gets the girl…or was it a case of the girl gets the guy?

A fun couple!

5

Nice story.

Would be funny if you also wrote the story from the view point of the two-pump chump (the IT guy she attacked) 😀

I agree with Boyd, "Fun couple." Love your fantasies and the way you describe them to us. If you remember more about this couple I hope you will tell us! 😉

Until next time.

Cheers

SAGE

Hi, Trionyx, I stayed up late and was able to finish this after all. This was a fun tale, but I felt a little frustrated for Miles. In her determination not to get close to him, Erin seemed willfully blind to Miles’ questions and minor criticisms being constructive and helpful. His willingness to wait until the time was right was sweet but also a bit weird in that he thought he’d lost her when she was dating Mario. The ending was good enough to bring them together though and considering that it’ s Romance, that’s the important part. Best wishes in the contest.

I agree with all the five star comments already made. I enjoyed the evolution of the relationship and how you created the obvious ending. Thanks for an amazing experience.

ANOTHER GOOD ONE !

THANK YOU ! !