All Comments on 'I Hate My Life Pt. 04'

by BigMadStork

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cursrahcursrahover 3 years ago

great series like most of your series

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Great Finish

As always, you tied it up nicely. I knew it was his mother, I don't know how you think up all these crazy ideas but I'm sure glad you share them with us. Thanks for this nice Christmas present.

MilehisexfunMilehisexfunover 3 years ago

Would have liked to see the other brother have some presence other than a mention in part one, but otherwise great story keep it up

Rdk781Rdk781over 3 years ago

Glad too see another story from you...loved it!! Hope you have a merry Christmas 🎄🎄

BigMadStorkBigMadStorkover 3 years agoAuthor

This happens to be my 100th posting. I see progress in my work and aim to continue improving. I thank everyone for your named comments and your generous stars.

Brandon11Brandon11over 3 years ago
Love my life

Love this story

JiZenJiZenover 3 years ago

Love this Series as i do with most of your other once. So hope there Will be mord to Come... O keep them comming.

meucimeuciover 3 years ago

I enjoyed it a lot. congratulations on #100 happy holidays to all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

You did again, thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Brilliant story

Thank you for such an amazing story. Everything about it was so good, I almost skipped the sex parts lol which has to be a sign of a well written story. I hope you are well and haven’t been affected by the dreadful Covid sh1t?! Take care and please continue writing. Best wishes

Nigel from the uk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Was disappointed in Cindy at the end with her meddling about by setting up the sisters so she could have Marco more.thats not how you repay your family for everything they have done for you.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 2 years ago

All round the story is good. AAAAAA++++++

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I feel like if he didn’t have a big dick no one would care about him and the story would be vastly different

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I've been skipping over this fantastic story for a few years now,just never sounded interesting to me. Boy was I wrong.this was a fantastic story and brought tears to my eyes several times. And I am not one to shed tears for anything.good job keep writing for us less talented people.great job Thanks!

Southpaw1430Southpaw14306 months ago

I enjoyed all four parts. Thanks.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19816 months ago

You ruined it for me to be honest it would have still been fine even when you decided to bring too many people in but more importantly when you brought in the other dick and then you ended up taking the story from incest to non incest we didn't start reading this to see that we wanted to read a incest only story only way bringing the others in can work in a incest story is if they are used to start the story not afterwards and definitely not to end it with that its only 2 stars anyone who says different is lying

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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