by frederickson866
Excellent writing...
from one sailor to another.... looking forward to whatever you have next.
"Fair winds and following seas" :-)
This author comes across as pompous. Not sure if it works yet. All his female characters end up with faked anger. Giving him the finger or a verbal volley.
I am seldom the guy to say “keep it going”. This is a somewhat satisfactory conclusion, but it would be fun to see how two “oldsters” re-navigate their lives together.
I’ve read all your sailing stories to date. I like your intelligent ladies. In two stories that word minuet has popped up. I really don’t think that kind of dancing is going on, try “minute”. Also, it’s “scent”, not “sent” when speaking of something olfactory.
Have not finished reading all of your stories yet, but I am enjoying every one of them so far !!!!!!!