All Comments on 'I Have a Guest Over'

I know Javier is the main character, but he doesn't really deserve a happy ending. He never actually shows us that he's a good person worthy of Brady's time or affection. He whines and complains and makes life difficult for other people, then he does two seconds of self reflection and realises how good he's got it. Even after that, it's Brady who does all the work to get them together.

Chapter 2 needed .......Javi needs another dick down to unwind his stiff ass

Needed a little more cocksucking for my taste. I should have cleaned that pussy juice off his cock after he fucked those girls.

Brady + Javi = great story, Javi needs another chapter to redeem himself and then Brady needs to realize Javi is the one for him. Five stars!

the story is good, but we REALLY need Javier to have a redemption arc in another part of this story (including an actual, humble, sincere "I'm sorry")

You really should continue with this story as currently I didn’t really find any of the characters particularly likeable. People keep shitting on Javi because yes he is an ass but Brady is hardly perfect, he seemed self centred and acted like their room was his room for most of the story. If you write any more about these two please make both a little more likeable, and less whining from Javi.

I vote against a sequel, unless it's so Brady can get some emotional growth and stop being the annoying, people pleasing man whore. I had a couple of roommates like him and what I like best is Javi was almost rewarded for putting up with Brady's shit and being treated like he was wrong just because they had two different personality types. Oha nd a part two would need to have Connor run over by a bus that then backs up and runs over him again...

I ship them damn it

If i had a roommate like brad, either I would kick him out or id move out. What is he running a sex house or something? They are in college dorm not some private house. But yeah to be honest it wouldn’t happen that much in dorms tho. May be few times in a month or so but not much and it would be same guy or girl you know like a fk buddy. But I’m curious how he’s maintaining 6 ppl without losing each of them over another….

Please do a chapter 2.

So I revisited this story after some time, and upon rereading, I love it exactly as it is. Never mind my earlier comment shout needing a real apology, though more chapters are always welcome