by StoryScott
Excellent build up but it feels like you left out the payoff.
Generally, you say something you have NOT done. So the speaker whose turn it is shouldn't be drinking.
I liked your idea. Most if these party game group sex stories involve couples and maybe a few single friends. The thought of playing one of these games with a boss and the "cool" uncle was intriguing.
You went way to fast however not really developing the story and became a lame stroke story.
jackie