All Comments on 'I Hope You Fuck Better Than You Lie'

Great story!

5

Excellent! 5

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I’m thrilled you’re resuscitating and resubmitting these old(er) stories. They’re like found money for the readers. An unexpected treat. Thanks much

Cute -- 5*

Thanks for sharing....

Not sure why you choose to repost this story, for me it was a solid 4* back-when. Nevertheless it’s still a great read.

Good story. Love your stuff.

5 stars for Gananoque and Kingston alone. Two amazing places. The story was decent but meandered way too much. Try to get more concise. Too many irrelevant side bars.

5* !!!

Again, I like the classics being reposted finally. First, hurray for medieval/renaissance-nerd power! Second, I'd have let the cops take her to the drunk tank both times.

You could have taken this to great places and chose RAAC

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ great story, thanks for reposting.

I enjoyed the story but thought the enfpding was a bit rushed, thanks for reposting!

Nice Adventure. Pretty good tale, Nice writing, a pleasure to read. I was there when he saw his wife with his boss. Hear breaking and shocking. But had a happy ending, sort of. 5 big Blazing stars. Buster2U

I like Hannah, just picture her busom in that low cut wench dress eh!

Thanks for posting this classic story! I remembered some but not all of the story. 5 stars.

I remember reading the story the first time. And I still have the same problem with it. Even attempting to connect with anybody who treats you like that and movies here. Louisiana when you intervene to help them..... It's just not acceptable. it shows a serious character flaw and I don't give a shit in helll how good the pussy is.... it's not worth that sort of disrespect or effort to build a relationship with

Excellent story and I do remember the older version. Thanks, I really enjoyed the newer version! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Love it, Ephesus14! I had forgotten this one, till I started reading. Thanks , E!

GREAT STORY!!!

This Story is a re-issue of an older edition.

No score because it was so boring I couldn’t get through it

Bigger that is a very good story. Ex yBitch did him a favor in the end.

Nice story. D

Why would he go for RAAC, it wasn't a one time mistake, Julie knew what she was doing and doing it willingly, it's like the MC told the ex-wife, you can't love someone and then lie and cheat on them, seriously, Wvrjjr, you're going to be trampled by women if you allow such a thing to happen to you

I remember reading this the first time. Well written, so many thanks for the pleasure of reading it. Cheers.

Great story, loved it.

Oh and on the by, I also enjoy those readers state emphatically how they didn't enjoy the story and couldn't read it to the end, with their comments made on the last episode of the story!

I think this one is better than "It Was An Amicable Divorce".

But really, IF I were MC, I wouldn't touch Hannah with a 10-foot pole.

Imagine seeing the brother during family occasions FOR LIFE?!

Nope. He is NOT going to be the uncle of my children.

I mean how many women are there in a small town anyways.

Story

Read it before and this is just as good as I remember, maybe better. Nice job

After catching his with he jumps back in his truck then the next line is home catching a taxi to the airport. Ernest and Hannah had some fucked up parents. I hope Hannah learn polite social skills before they get married

Hannah was an asshole and I find it hard to believe that a guy would put up with that much shit, but hey! People do grow on you if you keep letting them around. Decent story, glad it's back!

Oh, the intelligence shining from the anony peanut gallery.

And yes, I know I'm one of them, for my own reasons.

At least the anony who thought it was boring didn't score it. That's honest I suppose, and better than scoring low when you didn't finish. But then to bother to comment?

The other funny one is the very next one, informing us all that it's a repost. Err... yup.

Ephesus14's very first line:

"Another re-post of a previously deleted story".

Rocket scientist.

I find it very strange that an author's profile and complete works were lost, but I am glad that he has fans who kept copies, so they were not lost forever.

They are great stories. Might I suggest you keep a backup copy just in case it happens again. I'm sure you have already done just that.

I love that your protagonist found a path ahead, not through ninja skills and secret bank accounts, but by just living an honourable life.

I also like that in this one, while there was no epic burn, at least karma saw fit to correct the balance.

"I don't have a good reason for doing what I did." - I thought she "had no choice."

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"Only that you knew that none of it was your fault." - I think he knew that.

Thanks for re-posting. It’s just as good as the first time

Great story, half of it l’ve read before, the latter half of the story is totally different.

Did you rewrite it?

5/5

Kudos for the title.

Cheers, Cliffa

His Femdom agitprop stories all have momentum. They’re like being swept along in a tube on a small river…

As good as I remembered, keep them coming.

Only one question, HighBrow why do you punish yourself by reading these stories. I am beginning to believe that you protest too much…..

It remains unclear to me what was the benefit of Shirley's dispatcher from the fact that she convinced and pushed Julie to cheat on her husband and so diligently covered up her boss's affair?

Four stars, for a story I liked. One problem at the end. Buckshot is used to kill deer (bucks) so if he was shot in the ass with buckshot, it would likely have killed him or caused grave injuries.

JPB

One more item: Birdshot would have also caused grave wound. It is used to kill fowl in flight. Rock salt is a better load to teach somebody a lesson.

JPB

So what happened to his father's welding work,if thet just made swords and shields,.?

this was an excellent story. his dads shop had profitable purpose, his son found his worth. i would be willing to bet shirley the dispatcher was getting her a little from the owner also.

While I liked the story, I've some problems with Scott & Hannah. First was the disrespectful shoveoff at the movie theater. Scott was going to take her home until another guy showed up & took her. She apologized, they accepted. After a bit, when he told her of her brother's involvement in the divorce, she threw him out of the house, just saying he's lying. Then the restaurant where Scott's asked to leave after confronting Hannah & her brother.

Doesn't matter at that time that she again apologizes for the 3rd occasion, 3 strikes you're out. Should've been after the 2nd time. She didn't adequately say why she accepted the ride from this guy instead of Scott, then refused to believe her brother could do what he did. Either way...

Then there's the original- his wife. She had sex with the guy, easily being fed lies about her husband which she admitted to, & to make him the blame for her having sex with his boss. What a piece of demented flesh & blood. And after all of that, she wants to get back with him?

4 stars on the story and it's telling. 3 stars for Scott, 1-2 stars for the women. And one last question: I thought Dianne was Ted's sister, but they're getting married,.... I'm SOO confused! LOL But I'm not re-reading this. Bob

Liked the story, but a bit puzzled by how he could take her as a fuck buddy, knock her up and at the end thinking of marriage. I'd have had a bigger issue with the brother, doubt that I could have sat at the same table even for a short time without taking his head off.

Good

She is a victim of circumstances and so raac ok

Good story, I enjoyed a happy ending. Thanks for your writing.

I so enjoyed this well written story

.I'm always most busy and avoid the longer stories. I'm pleased I stayed in this . Well do I did not stray a bit

Thank

To be honest I don't see why commenters are bashing on Hannah. At times the MC was a sulking jerk. Not with Julie, she was a head case who got easily seduced, had a multimonth affair, as she swallowed a bunch of bs from Shirley and Brad about Brad's wife, and about how the MC is surely betraying her. Then she thought she was going to trade up and marry Brad. Until reality hit the fan. Was almost comical when she came back to talk and at the end asked for a second chance. Rofl.

But regarding Hannah. First the movie theater incident was a nothingburger. She was really pissed at the Octopus and agreed to have the MC take her home (he was being a nice guy then), but when another guy she already knew better came up and asked her is she needed a ride home, she went with him. So what? Sure she should have acknowledged the MC for being chivalrous, and she isn't Miss Manners, but she was relaly pissed at the Octopus. But the MC is butthurt. And sulks. And won't chat with her. Then the whole games about what she did wrong, steeping around it, being evasive and ghosting her till the night (by luck) in the bar. They were not dating. Had zero relationship. Yes she could have said the next day, something like thanks but I felt more comfortable with Jimmy, who is an old friend of mine. Or hey I was too pissed at the time to see straight that night but thanks for the offer. The MC offering her help and she switching to get a ride with another guy is not remotely a big deal. She pledged nothing to him. Yes she lacked some manners. Big freaking deal. Honestly he was a sulking twit the next several weeks. When he saw her the next day, he coukd have easily just asked if she was got home alright and is she doing OK. Using that as an opening to see if she acknowledges his offer. A formal apology is over the top. But he is really prickly.

Then the stuff about Brad, her brother. She was put in a difficult spot and they had only been dating for something like 2 months. He knew that if he confessed what really happened, it would end their relationship. She believed her brother who she has loved and known all her life. Is that at all surprising. Yes she was upset, not just because of what she thought his role in her brother's divorce, but also because she was falling in love with the MC. And her fantasy just all of a sudden burst.

And the restaurant scene. Why woukd she act any differently. She isn't particularly well mannered. He confronted them at their table during a celebration of her brother's (presumed) birthday, and started insulting her brother. Would any of you do anything differently if an ex accosted your sibling, believing that your sibling was a victim in his divorce, let alone due to involvement of the ex in question?

If the MC wanted to proved to her so badly what happened, he could have sent her thr message he recorded of Brad. Could have asked the ex sister-in-law to talk to Hannah. Instead he told his story and walked away. Only at the restaurant, and only because Brad was there, did he challenge her to look at the courthouse records and her ex sister-in-law's divorce filing.

But walking away is his modus operandi. He did it with Julie. Not blaming, just staying how he reacts to bad things (nor can I blame him once he learns the truth and hears her lies). Then when Hannah apologized after learning the truth. He just waves her off and walks away. She kept pursuing, while giving him some space. But he decided he can't get over the fact that her brother trashed his forat marriage, which couldn't have been all that good considering how easily Julie fell for Brad's seduction and all the bs that she swallowed (among other things). As an aside, what the heck did Shirley get out of aiding Brad to seduce Julie and route the MC all over the place? Money?

Anyways it was only Hannah bring relentless and truly devoted, even agreeing to be exclusive with him but letting him sleep with other women. Luckily his father told him to sh$t or get off the port. And he finally did.

Glad they put it all together and they are happy, building a family and soon to be married (would like to have seen a bit more at the end). But the MC was not some pinnacle protagonist. He did nothing to.merit what happened with Julie. He had back luck with Hannah. But based on what she thought to be true, she did nothing egregious. Yes it hurt him, and her, but she did not have the truth. When she did, she acted appropriately. If anything she bent over backwards to her past his reluctance and denial.

Glad he found and reconciled with Hannah. On a site filled with bitchy cheating LWs, Hannah is the real deal and had the courage to pursue him after learning the truth, and in doing so going against the will of her family (whom she later illuminated). She will be a true loving wife. The three strikes comment below is just wrong, especially in light of who knew what. Virtually no one after two months of dating will believe the boyfriend over a brother on such a serious matter on what led to her brother's divorce. That would always be a big elephant.

Good story, almost enough erotica, really like Hannah...

Glad Julie figured out some of her problems, and that our MC might become a whole person again as well.

Very good storytelling. Thank you. The protanganists in many of your stories all seem to be stiff necked, prideful jerks. I wonder if you could dial that back a little and still have the tension and drama you need for an exciting story. Just the thought of a fellow Soldier living the good life on retired pay...

4 stars, because the ex didn't suffer ANY damage from what she did (divorce doesn't count as "damage" in my book). I'm not a super big fan of Hannah, but I don't think she is awful for MC.... but it's hard to believe she is any different from her brother as far as lack of morals. So, I took off a star for that.

I Hope You Fuck Better Than You lie ...

I, Tail_Gunner ( AKA Levi Coldwater ) hope that you do some "straight" writing ... You have a real talent; but, I think that you know that.

I seldom read stories on this site for the "story" itself. ... This one is worth reading just for the story.

... and, the sex is good! Not 5 star, but good.

... ... Keep up the good work!

This is a good story, I like Hannah.

So stupid and sophomoric AND BORRINGGGG. 2/5

The author was doing so good until the buckshot reference. Sounds cool but in reality buckshot is about 1/4-1/2 inch lead balls uses to kill deer. If he has been shot in the ass with it, there would have been multiple balls that impacted resulting in death due to blood loss or from the scatter pattern winding up in the abdomen.

However, birdshot is BB sized and smaller. It would have been non-fatal and resulted in the hilarious situation where Bradley is face down on the operating table with the surgeon with forceps in one hand digging in his ass and metal detector in other broken occasionally of a metallic ding as he drops a piece of shot into the stainless steel kidney pan.

Wow a lot of descriptions on your weekends but it made it longer than it needed to be I thought.

Story was full of unlikely Sales,

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The author was doing so good until the buckshot reference. Sounds cool but in reality buckshot is about 1/4-1/2 inch lead balls uses to kill deer.

This remark above shows he is not knowledgeable about Buckshot Which is only 1/4 inch approx. A 1/2" shot gun projectile (??) for hunting deer is not round, but shaped like a cone . Buck shot is not a good choice for hunting deer, most deer would simply run of and die some distance away, maybe a mile of more.) unless deer was shot at 60 - 80 feet distance.))

I gave it a good grade for writing.

If I were a woman I sure wouldn't want to be married to the MC. If I was the MC I sure wouldn't want to be married to the woman he ended up with.

Don't take my comments seriously.

Good story well written, though no consequences for Shirley annoyed me a bit unless i missed it somehow you put a ton in one sentence every now and then

I can only give this 3* because of the absurdity of a welder just seguing into becoming a weaponsmith and then an armourer, as if the tools and skill sets required were just so similar and easy to pickup. Also, no mention of woodworking skills, which are absolutely required for making shields.

All it needed was a few paragraphs that explained how he picked up the skills, and a registering of the fact that it wasn't easy. Honestly, I just read it thinking that he was making and selling the worst kind of junk that you'd expect from a tacky tourist shop in Carcassonne with a made in China sticker attached.

Thr cheating wife part was also a bit spotty and I was totally disgusted by the facts that Shelly(?), at the trucking company, got away scott free, even though she aided and abetted the cheating.

At the very least she deserved to have all her fingers broken. Tbh, I had been kind of hoping that his discovery was done on purpose and orchestrated by her... but that whole thing was just played off as a mistake and quickly forgotten.

There's a very telling sentence in this story that should be a warning to all males and one which the author didn't follow up on the obvious implications.

If a woman ever says (before, during or after sex) that she'll still be wanting dick after you've given her your best, she's telling you straight up that you'll never fully satisfy her.

Have fun, but remember to run. Unless you like the idea of being cucked.

Not the cleanest redemption romance, meaning Hannah was a bit of a train wreck. Most of the romantic interests were highly flawed characters. That felt like it packed a lot of story in for less than 14K words.

Only way you could have improved it was made the revenge/karma on the ex-wife, Brad, Joey and Shirley more painful and prominent during their portions of the story. The Hannah character was tough to empathize with, primarily because of her family ties.

All of that said, a really good story that took on some challenges to add variety to the Relationship Drama subgenre of Loving Wives stories.

Wandered around in a semi-coherent way with no apparent throughline or plot.

Fun story. Brings back some nice memories of attending the Renaissance Festivals in Msryland.

good story but what late 20's woman, Hannah, doesn't have any kind of job?