All Comments on 'I Host my Niece's Pool Party Pt. 03'

I didn't know how you'd top the other parts, but you pulled it off gloriously!

Axelotto

What a great series. You did a fantastic job of developing every character in detail. Story line is very well written. Really enjoyed reading the ending of part three. Never heard of a golden egg before. Nice touch. Please do not stop posting to this site.

Stork, you are an amazing story teller! This series is one of my favorites. Was almost sad to see it come to an end, though the ending was hilarious and awesome. By the way, I honestly think one of my favorite parts was when he told Malissa's boyfriend "A handshake will do."😂

I wonder if the author has ever had sex. Although they tell a good story the sex seems flat

FANTASTIC story

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS

Not sure about Stacy and Jamie and the kids and parties

Absolutely fabulous as always, BigMadStork. You left the story open for a fourth chapter. I am looking forward to see where you go with the next party if you, hopefully, decide to continue with this series.

That was simply awesome !

One of the best I've read on here.

What else is there to say, other than thank-you !

Rapier

You could write about a 25 year re-union ?

All the girls in the team could return - together with their own daughters, (plus their sons?), and make it into a proper orgy.

But the event needs to last for more than one night - maybe during Spring Break or at Thanksgiving ?

Just a thought..........

Rapier

Truthfully, just so-so. Back in part 2, "investigation reveals that John was a bad man and linked to several more crimes." Really? An investigation revealed that? She was married to the guy, and had no hint he was a bad hombre? Yeah, right. Here in the last version, Phil shot 5 or "6 long ropes" every time he came - and he only did that Oh, about 30 times. Not a chance.

So many little things, Part 1, 24 girls, 24 mothers, 48 in total (although you only had 40 cleaning up) - you've obviously never had a house party with 48 women in it before. And then to come back four years later, each of the girls with a significant other, each of the women with a husband or SO, that makes 96 people in that one tiny room. Just too much to be believable. Going anonymous as I don't want a pissing match, just very disappointed.

really wonderful story....thankyou!

I really get rather annoyed at some of the comments I continually read here and in other stories too about negative points. Strewth! wise up please, enjoy the stories, especially the entertaining ones like this and quit with the stupid points that are made, instead give proper due to these writers who entertain us....!I for one really liked this tory and shall seek out your other stories....again, thanks

This series is the way I wish ALL erotica would be written. Believable characters, Realistic emotional responses to situations, True world scenery, Fantastical sex scenes, and a Great story line. What few minor inconsistencies that may occur are of no concern to me to effect the enjoy-ability of the story. 5* all three parts. Favorite all 3 parts. Author Favorite along time ago. I am a old fan of the site and a new author in the making. My hope is to one day be in your league. Thanks for the years of entertaining stories and inspiration.

truly wonderful.....

All 3 parts are great

An excellent way to tell a story.

I loved the story.

Perhaps there might be more with Stacy, and Jamie?

Alright. Earlier today I read parts of your Bad Girl storyline. While it's a newer story compared to this, I couldn't get through it in part because of the setting and the way the MC, Bill, was portrayed.

This one, while an older story and as much over the top (in a different way) as the Bad Girl storyline somehow feels more believable. It's still all made up, but you kept the story and sideshow shenanigans a lot more focussed. A suggestion if you're reading comments on old stories, maybe it's time to reign yourself in a bit and not go balls out with the crazy storylines?

And I do wonder what kind of Tardis style secret room Phil had in his house that can comfortably host 44+ people. Sounds more like a whole secret floor, to be honest ;-)