All Comments on 'I Just Don't Know . . . Ch. 03'

by BarelyJust

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
good part 3

that statement she made on the first story is starting to become a false statement, can't wait to read the rest to see if I am right

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
relating to the whole story so far

ive just read the whole of "i just dont know..." with great pleasure - i found the main characters very real it was as i had met them fairly recently - the dialogue was very smooth and fresh (a common failing on literotica is cliched chat)

the story was very erotic again unlike a lot of other tales on this site the sensuality was both stimulating and provoking - i really hope that more chapter are being written at this moment

kind regards

nick

baronerth@aol.com

CABONECABONEover 14 years ago
Nicely Done

The series was exceptionally well written and elegant. You make the reader feel that they are part of the story. Thank you for a well done, emotional, sensual piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Picky, picky

You meant "minimalist design elements" rather than minimal design, I think. Still, I got the spare elegance of the hotel room, perfect backdrop for your lush characters. Thx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful story.

I hope this is not the end of their story.

Anonymous
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