by BarelyJust
that statement she made on the first story is starting to become a false statement, can't wait to read the rest to see if I am right
ive just read the whole of "i just dont know..." with great pleasure - i found the main characters very real it was as i had met them fairly recently - the dialogue was very smooth and fresh (a common failing on literotica is cliched chat)
the story was very erotic again unlike a lot of other tales on this site the sensuality was both stimulating and provoking - i really hope that more chapter are being written at this moment
kind regards
nick
baronerth@aol.com
The series was exceptionally well written and elegant. You make the reader feel that they are part of the story. Thank you for a well done, emotional, sensual piece.
You meant "minimalist design elements" rather than minimal design, I think. Still, I got the spare elegance of the hotel room, perfect backdrop for your lush characters. Thx.