by Alex De Kok
It was a good story.But you need to finish it.You need to finish the visit with the cousins birthday. And with Jenny going to collage and Pete making a visit.
This has the makings of a hot mini-series. Interesting characters, perhaps you could involve some of Pete's friends in a hot strip poker scene! Excellent erotic writing!!
Please continue - Maybe Pete with both Jenny & Marilyn or even better, both Moms and Uncle.
When I was half way through, I suddenly thought that there is only one author who writes so literately and arousingly (to put it mildly). I broke off to check, and sure enough I was right: de Kok.
You are a national (probably international) treasure, Mr de Kok. Thank you yet again for a great story superbly told. The hero and heroine are such a frank and engaging pair that I hope to read about them again. And again.
May we hope for sequels? Perhaps there is a story behind the alacrity with which the parents became welcome and practiced play-mates. There has to have been a history - and story - there. I'd love to hear it from the de Kok pen or keyboard.
Aurelian
Just a real 'Alex De Kok - story'.
When do we get the continuation?
Please continue this story! It's a great first chapter.
*peace*
~ Megan.
I've read several of your stories and enjoyed them all, but I think this one is one of the best. Wish there were chapters 2, 3, and more. This would have been a good lead-in chapter. Thanks for posting.
after Birthday celebrations, for quick feels during the work session, for photos and skinny-dipping and more. And, yes, some insight into the history of the 3 adults easy passion. As I began this, I thought that it might be the best yet - actually, I'm thinking this about most of the stories as I read progressively from 2000 forward. They just keep getting better. But then I had a slight lapse - the aggressiveness of Jenny seemed a bit unbelievable, but then I realized that this IS EROTICA, and anything goes. I also remembered why I like many of Alex's stories - they are about teens, and there's nothing better to take me back to the best days of my life, my teen years and early 20's when many of my girlfriends were ever so willing to try most anything. Only two were so forward as to push, actually initiate, the action, but they were wonderful and I appreciate the opportunity to relive those experiences vicariously through this story and others by Alex. Thanks. And the others are right on with suggestions of a series. There's a lot yet untold.
this dumb writer should have been banned years ago and all his half stories deleted. you just waste the readers time posting partial stories, either finish them properly or delete them so new readers don't get left hanging like the rest of us did.
Just a shame it won't be finished. After an 11 year wait, I guess you won't be adding go this. Pity !
A good story of young lust. Well done Alex. Mixing it up with the parents made it even more exciting. I so want to see what happens at the pool later.