All Comments on 'I Know What You Want'

by SimonDoom

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ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 4 years ago

I am still laughing. A lot. As I imagine you were, writing this. See, I've always said Suzie's the best.

Carry on :)

Omart57Omart57over 4 years ago
Absolutely Fantastic!

Great Hot little story, Simon! Loved it!

EvelynEdenEvelynEdenover 4 years ago
Always love a twist

This was great, quite unique and so well written!

SamScribbleSamScribbleover 4 years ago

Clever. I was expecting a twist, but it still surprised me. Well done.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 4 years ago
That was unexpected!

I really loved the twist. Thanks. 5 Stars.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 4 years ago
Great.

Oh the pressure of being a cam star with exams in the morning. Fun twist.

holliday1960holliday1960about 4 years ago
Great Job, SD!

Especially for a 750 word story! Excellent writing.

Soshameless11Soshameless11almost 4 years ago
Not a word wasted

This is probably my favorite of the 750-word stories I've read! So hot.

Gym52Gym52over 3 years ago
Excellent

An enjoyable read especially when it's only 750 words long.

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Wonderful, would love to see the story continue for where you left off..............():\

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Hwat, Hawt, Hawt!

11/10 Purple Vibes!!!!!

Djmac1031Djmac103112 months ago

I don't know why 750 word stories never seem to get the ratings they deserve.

Short, sweet, sexy and right to the point.

Nekomusume_DaisukiNekomusume_Daisuki3 months ago

Really nice one! Worthy of a follow-up!

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 8 hours ago

"I know What You Want:" - It's a very good thing this story is not a dick/penis/cock. It sooo short that if it were a dick/penis/cock, women/ females would never be fucked with with a real dick/penis/cock again!! They'd be using cucumbers or dildos or their middle finger, in order to ever get anything bigger, longer than three (3) inches into their pussy ever again.

I'm an eternal incest/taboo genre fan, especially father and daughter. This story theme of a daughter and her father is right in my "wheelhouse" of pornography stories. This story fits that scenario, but too short.

Maybe, as a suggestion, the writer/author 'SimonDoom' would take a suggestion to write a similar themed story, as this one, in a full length story...three, four or five pages, or more.

A good job considering the constraints the authors had to work with--750 word maximum.

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I am a long-time reader of stories on this Site, and I began publishing stories in late 2016. I enjoy a variety of erotic stories, and I hope to publish stories that explore many different aspects of erotica. Comments and constructive criticism are welcome.