by I_am_just_writing
This was a logical story. I like how you added inhibition from the person being hypnotized and the woman in control. Can't wait to read the next story in this series.
I liked the story. I would also like a continuation of it with her coming back the next day.
Aside from a couple of minor spelling mistakes which I usually ignore on most stories unless they confuse me (which this one did) where you were stating that Drusilla would use the spell to have her professor give her “As” instead of A’s which would have made more sense but not a story killer at all. I thought you did a great job in making sure that it was serious but also lighthearted enough and even made me laugh out loud with the little dry butt situation. 5 stars and a big grin from me.
Mitchell
The internal dialogue was perfect!! Adds so much to the domination point. Honestly, I wish more were like this. You hit it on the dot.
This was well crafted. Everything flowed really well. The reasons and the rules are so clear & followed. I was beginning to get so envious. I wanted to be Dru so bad. Really looking forward to the next 15 minutes.
Great short story. The plot was thought out and had a wiccan theme of "do no harm' to it. Would love to see more.
I like it. Hope you will make one further into their relationship where they are more comfortable, but still exploring desires and how to bring joy to each other. Consensual mind control is more fun