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id love to find a couple like that

Still wrestling with tense continuity?

Good chapter, nicely done.

Please, take yourself to the next level as an author and reign on the tense irregularities.

You stories are GOOD, your editing is not equal to your proficiency in writing.

Ty for the feedback :), I will admit most of these are written quickly :P. I should get into the habit of going back over them, not just for spelling.