All Comments on 'I’m a Bad Wife Ch. 01'

by Erosbadwriter

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muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 month ago

Badly need an editor

lustylionlustylionabout 1 month ago

Story line is good but language needs much improvement. The author seems careless about spelling e.g. 'staring' is always spelt as 'starting'. Better take the help of an editor.

ErosbadwriterErosbadwriter25 days agoAuthor

Sorry for the spelling error, it was due to auto correct in the app in which I was writing the story I will make sure check the spelling manually in coming works

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Good Story and you could make it a long series. Your other story is not as good as this is and also this has a lot more potential for many more stories on same series.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Good Start but Don't let us wait for long for next parts of this story.

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Story is nice but if you don't complete it or release next parts after many many days then people will leave you behind. A good author don't let their audience wait for long.

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

I can sense a good writer in you, hopefully you keep the momentum right in coming parts of this story.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

Good Start Buddy!

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