All Comments on 'I Made Her For You'

Horrible POV choice, for a bad premise. Swing and a miss.

Was OK. Could have done with more between being filled and him cumming, and with the amount given came close but didn't quite. Perhaps rising passion and more wanting to hold him in, or something?

2nd person stories suck and are an automatic rating of 1.

Get a different hobby

Absolutely horrible! Grooming and abuse ffs!!!

She will look great with the baby bump her father have her.

You need to add more to the stories when you write them a two page story with a great ending!!!

Might have been almost two stars except for the POV - not telling it in second person {though that's Not A Good Idea} but putting it in resent tense. The only writer who really got away with that was Damon Runyon

And you ain't him.

I’ll have to agree with the previous anonymous comment; too rushed and very awkward POV. A slower burn to ignition point might have helped?

This is about as bad as it can get, dreadful.

I couldn't wait to be 18 and have my dads 10 inch cock in me,my mom was there helping him fuck me hard while she sucked my hard nipples,we all fucked for years and still do 8t todau

Terrible piece of writing. Absolutely agree with PornGoddess2's comment . . . .