All Comments on 'I Miss My Wife'

When you play with fire, you might get burned!

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Didn't result! He played with fire and who got burned were his wife and his lover! He was free to have another wife and another lover! Why didn't the wife put some bullets in him too? The gun had nine bullets in it! Enough for the two cheaters! That was more like it! 1*

Play stupid games, win stupid prizes in the Loving Wives arena.

In LW, had the sexes been reversed, the outraged husband would have been acquitted.

Nice twist there at the end. I like it.

Nice twist.

Despite being well written, that might be the most fucked-up story I've ever read on this forum. Two women lose their life, and the dude and his loving dick, live happily ever after, feeling only sadness for their own inconvenience...

A little much for me. And...nine rounds without hitting him? D

Originally bizarre. Arguably more robust piece if you had developed the female MCs and the plot. That could still be fine with this as prologue. Just saying.

A nice twist on lost loves and cheating spouses.

Wife may be in prison, but she does not lose any rights to her property. Just because someone goes to jail doesn't alter anything - they still jointly own the property. So, whole point of the story is based on a legal fallacy.

So story should never have been written.

Husband and wife will also be subject to lawsuit by intern's family.

Unfortunate that wife killed the intern and not the husband.

agree with Strappy

The only real thing that hit the target was the wife using his Glock 27 which shoots 9 rounds. A .40 caliber is hard for a woman to handle and almost impossible she didn't hit the husband if he was right there. But that is nit picking.

Selling or giving away all his wife's stuff? Nope. Illegal. He'd be on his way to the male prison. Man did not even have the decency to give his mother in law the two heirlooms? That alone would insure they press charges. Not just consult a lawyer.

Surprised he is still walking around after obviously seducing a 19 year old working for him. Be an interesting story to him get his.

Clever, but nasty twist. Just when I was feeling sorry for a poor guy who had lost his wife - BOOM, he's a cheating asshole! The wife directed her anger at the wrong person!

Pretty well written, thanks for sharing.

since I look at these things as works by a writer, rather than reflections of Real Life {c}, I look for intent.

Here, I think the author was working on expectations and was having fun inverting and perverting them. In that light, the author's pre-story comments could be seen as part of the misdirection, as well as stating the reasons for the misdirection.

So, did I think it was funny?

Yup.

You might try to find it funny too.

Green-something

A little bit for the people who focus on the hardware...

Green-something

And HE'S still walking around upright?? Shithead. This guy needs to meet someone in a dark alley. The Bear has Italian relatives who could handle this. I would myself, but I'm 74, and would have to use a Glock myself. The Bear gives two stars because it was nicely crafted. Just shitty.

The BEAR

Wife still had 8 rounds for him, why did she not use them. Thanks for your writing.

That was really dark. Why didn't his wife shoot him??

She shoulda got her moneys’ worth and shot both of you, as she probably had nine more rounds, It’s %100 the cheating bastard’s fault.

Non-Erotic would have been a better choice. And frankly, I read this twice and still have no idea what happened.

This was just a confusing mess of words.

Loving wife or just plain revenge?

If wifey was going down for topping the slag she wouldn’t have gotten much longer if she put a few holes in him as well. As the piece of excrement says at the end men will never understand women.

Why write?? U r mentally ill i get it!! But woudl it not be better to get diagnosed by a doctor rather then wallow in the aftermath of ur disease invading all ur senses???

Pse get help! U need it! I pity you !

Nice twist to the story. Too busy paying attention to the kleptomaniac sister an mother in law. Then the tomb stone, just staring at 2003-2022, confused…… Haha got me.

Thanks for writing…..

Argh.

MC was a despicable asshole.

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3 ***

Barely a Loving Wives story, probably better in Non-Erotic. This was a story about the aftermath of a Loving Wives story, that could have been dramatic and compelling. This is maybe the Epilog to an LW story, but not more. And what was the point? A rambling dithering setup to the Glockout punch delivered by the wife? A cheap, if fairly accurate shot(s).

Just another husband trying to make the wife the evil one.

Most wives would have put at least an equal amount of lead into the husband.

RE that might be the most fucked up. LOL Chym wrote one named something like Pandoras Box. It was so fucked up... it got pulled.

Overall original so I gave it a 5 for being out of the box.

Some of the comments are almost as funny as the story.

Don't have a clue as to how to rate this ! Too short to get involved in the story . Too brutal in the abrupt ending . You write good stories . Keep it up ! Just my first thoughts .

Funny. If the whole family joined in, why isn't he dead? Small family?

As already asked, why didn't she use the rest of yhe magazine on the cheating asshole who instigated the whole thing?

It's sad that people often can't distinguish the difference between love and attraction. This guy was attracted to both women but loves only himself

Wow! I did not see that coming. Considering all the stories here about wi es that want both their husband and their boyfriend, it doesn't seem so far fetched.

Pity is it not, that the wife has such a "fragile female ego".

But as it has been pointed out the husband's ego did not leave room for any other ego.

The strange thing is that if the roles were reversed people would have been still dumping on the husband.

Was going to pass this one up but seeing who wrote it made me curious. I’m glad I took the chance. Well written and the ending is one of the best I’ve read in months. 4.7*

Almost

You don't forfeit your property when you're incarcerated. The wife's personal belongings as well as her share of the marital assets would still belong to her. She could designate who she wants to manage her assets, and the odds that it would be her cheating husband are nil. He'd most likely be dealing with an angry mother-in-law who held a power of attorney and could legally block him from selling or giving away anything his wife owned any piece of.

He cheated, he got caught. He instigated what happened, it is his fault!

Even though this is a one rare reversed-roles tale, in this LW category, the mistery is the same: why the cheated spouse always go to punish (beat, kill,...) the lover and almost always let untouched the real betrayer, the spouse cheater ? The absolute main responsible is clearly the cheating spouse, and the lover is no more than an accomplice in the betrayment. This totally nonsense is happening in almost all the cheating tales with some btb/payback. Maybe the writer want to spare its own gender MC, even when awfully culprit ?

Nonsense tale and nonsense MC behaviours: a flat selfish emotionless husband and an enraged wife who shoots in the wrong direction. What's the point in using these totally unrealistic, brainless characters ?

I don't understand how the husband retains the wife's assets when she is in prison. Surely they remain her possessions.

Strange short story with an unexpected ending. Three stars ⭐️ for this one.

I can see why they wouldn't want that on the gravestone.

Sdc97230 - you’re assuming that the wife didn’t spend here half of the marital assets on defense lawyers.

Unexpected twist. Nice.

It is the reverse of a typical cheating wife story, where the wife catches him with some young thing and kills the lover. This story would work better if the wife killed the lover and herself, plus would give him the rights to her assets. Surprised wife went to jail, this would be classic temporary insanity plea.

I agree with MattblackUK, play stupid games win stupid prizes………… also sometimes read lame ass stories. The sad thing is this story was a waste of time I can never get back.

Reading the comments is hysterical fun. I feel like I’m in a movie theater with people yelling advice to the big screen. News flash- the characters can’t hear you and the writer wrote what he wrote and doesn’t care if you understand the story or not. It was well written, showed the main character’s flaws in the end, and didn’t reveal the twist until the end. Excellent!

"News flash ..." the readers comment whatever they feel like and doesn’t care if other readers agree or not. Most often the negative feedbacks are the more constructive. Hilarious those readers trying to impose agressively their opinion over the different ones: every reader has the right to express whatever he/she want, positive or negative, as long as the platform rules are respected.

Love Twists!

As a guy I felt bad for him until the end . Cheating creates a monster and all will react differently. I for me understand the wife’s actions and would’ve liked that maybe she got released in early time due to temporary insanity.

At 69 yrs old and 48 yrs married to the same girl, I'll never understand infidelity. Don't want one girl at a time? Don't gert married. Period.......

TWIST ENDING.... ☝️. . . . . SURPRISE!¡¡!

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Okay, yeah, you got me xD Thats one hell of a twist ending, although Id argue that your preface about BTB is wrong... the bitch who slept with a married man is definitely burning somewhere, and the bastard who cheated on his wife is burning in a hell of his own making.

I didn't like it.

Loved it.

It's really weird to read some of the role reversal comments. If the husband had been the killer, nobody would be complaining, but now that the wife is in that role, ... there are some real misogynists on here.

Interesting tale

What a dumbass, he's so lucky his wife didn't use the remaining round on him!!

LOL, so how did his "beloved" die? I don't understand