All Comments on 'I Need Another Man'

The story was great and would have earned a 5 but there were a lot of grammatical errors.

I loved your first story and this one is was fantastic (except for the ending sad face). I can't wait to see what you do with Robyn next!!! I think one thing I really enjoy in your stories is that you include self-talk that helps us see not only what she does but what she is thinking.

I have to say you've captured what I wish (and probably many other too) could take place for real!!!!!

Hugs!

Your story was well told and a joy to read. It was filled with passion and was brought to a sad but final conclusion. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.