All Comments on 'I Need to Process This Ch. 01'

Keep it up, love to see where this story goes

This is really picky, but PPE is a course at Oxford, not Cambridge.

Interesting premise.

But I can't imaging a more boring way to describe sex.

One star.

I like it so far, bring it on!

Cant wait to read more of this

Well PPE is offered by many universities, not just Oxford unless you are a blinkered ex Etonian

Well done for your first story. I like where this may be going and hope they can be together romantically and a happy ending is always a joy to read.

You got le hooked. I really need to read where this will lead!

My 2 cents

Not a bad start. Interesting characters and there is a story line. Good build up. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I thought it was a great build-up to what I hope will come, It's the longest I've ever spent on one of these stories with no sex. If it doesn't come in the next chapter I won't read any more.

I think I read it before, but couldn't remember the details. I decided to review it in preparation to reading part 2. Really well done developing the back story and characters. The passing of the mother brought tears to my eyes, so well done! 5* so far...

Why am I thinking Hermione Granger and Ron Weasley? Well written, tugs at the heart strings of course but the sex with the girlfriend arrived suddenly compared with the pace of the rest of the story. Intrigued to read the rest and how brat sister and grumpy bro get it on

I love this kind of stories, but the build-up was just awful 3/5

Very clever build-up with good character development.

Really wondering where this is going.

Having recently experienced the passing of a loved one, I found it hard to relate to the near apathy that Davie projects in the wake of his mother's death. There are tears. There's a hint of heartache. However, the passing of someone like a mother is typically described as an earth-shattering experience. Would there be a schism in Davie's timeline? Forevermore, there would be his life before his mother died, and his life after. It seems like his soul would be so deeply wounded that even a subtle graze against it might send him careening out of control. Perhaps he wasn't close to his mother at all. Even so, is it disrespectful to the memory of his mother to masturbate to his sister's image in his deceased mother's home hours after her death?

Very well written story. I'm going to read the other chapters now!

Like the story a lot. AAAA++++