All Comments on 'I Only Wanted You'

Great debut story.

Nicely paced and wholly believable

Looking forward to seine their relationship progress

Well written. I knew a couple of women who were raised with similar hangups. Mainly from their religious parents.

It was fun helping them with their "journey of discovery". Sadly, one of them, the one I "really" liked, decided her learning also included random hookups and also included meeting arsehole guys who partyied hard with lots of drugs etc. She thought her new journey also included that as well and they took advantage of her while I was away working. When I got back two months later she was getting stoned and having gangbangs.

We didn't survive as a couple.

Please continue writing! I need the next chapter of their story!!!

Please—finish the story

Nice story. It's nice to see this sheltered girl grow out of her past. Don't let it stop here. I think we all have that "one that got away".

Please continue

Your writing style is great.

I I were luck enough to be him (sigh), I’d get the joyous of sex, or the more modern Cosmo’s guide to red-hot sex -which surprisingly, is very tasteful

What a sweet, wonderful story. Very well-paced with a nice flow, and interesting development of the characters. You have a fantastic writing style that keeps your reader engaged. A terrific debut. Can’t wait to read more of you!

Well worth the enjoyment of your readers for you to continue with chapter 2. Don't end their journey ... they aren't home yet.

An enthralling tale, hopefully just the beginning of a series of a developing story. Well written, well plotted, and a great romance without endless graphic sex scenes.

The author is a flaming ass hole - I thought we were going - or rather the two leading players - were going to get ii on in th se last page - but he didn’t so now I have to wait

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MANIPULATIVE. NOT INTERESTED IN MORE OF YOUR SUPERIOR APPROACH TO YOUR READERS!!!. FU

Incomplete Bullshit!!!

Interesting subject, and written very nicely. I've enjoyed both chapters thus far, and it all comes together realistically. I'm hoping for a continuation of the series. Author has real talent!

Would love to see Rob with a splash of sexy chest hair for his chest and abs -- and this would be a real turn on for Natalie. He loves and cares deeply for her. Get them together, please!

Great build up, can't wait for the rest.

This is a captivating story! Thanks for sharing!

The premise is good but this is 7 pages long: 3 pages of quality, 4 pages of fluff.

Really enjoyed this! Where ch 7 ends is a really good stopping point, though I’d be lying if I said I wouldn’t enjoy seeing them through to their marriage. Because of course they are soulmates and are going to be married and have a wonderful life together.

Great story about two loving souls. Great character and story development. Rob is compassionate and understands Natalie’s hang ups and fixations and applies the maxim “good things come to those who wait”. He applies a steady pressure and is guiding Natalie. She’s aware of the damage done but also wants to go slow. Waiting for more about them