All Comments on 'I Only Went for a Walk'

Feedback welcomed!

You have to remember that women read these stories as well.

You sound incredulous like this wouldn't happen. Then this morphs into being a bit unrealistic.

For being a first time poster it was a good start.

Always proofread. Her instead of here.

For your comment!

I did intake at a detox/psychiatric hospital for several years, your story is real life. Drunk women do it all, and don't care who see's it.

I scored it 5 Starz for its realism alone, but your writing is good, too.