by moooose
I did intake at a detox/psychiatric hospital for several years, your story is real life. Drunk women do it all, and don't care who see's it.
I scored it 5 Starz for its realism alone, but your writing is good, too.
You have to remember that women read these stories as well.
You sound incredulous like this wouldn't happen. Then this morphs into being a bit unrealistic.
For being a first time poster it was a good start.
Always proofread. Her instead of here.