All Comments on 'I Remembered on Her Anniversary'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nah

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GOOD STORY BUT YOU ARE BADLY IN NEED OF AN EDITOR!

I agree w/ the other person who commented on your story.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Yep sauce for the Goose and all that -

He now had to deal with the reality that so much generosity had a price and he now paid it without the benefit of being part of the decision or any part of the choice - he thought with his little head -

She cheated - better yet she knew it and used it to deny him - of course he took a second run at his sister and it is unclear if that was OK with cheating wifey or not??

Two wongs do not make a right - only two lefts do -

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Thank You***

Good Read.

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