All Comments on 'I See The Moon'

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE MOON PLAYS STRANGE TRICKS

and puts its force of nature to the earth, TK U MLJ LV NV

SW_MO_HermitSW_MO_Hermitalmost 12 years ago
Great

Well written heat wrending tale. I could almost feel the pain, lonliness and love your portray.

sailordblj1966sailordblj1966almost 12 years ago
Wonderful Story

This was a wonderful story. Really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work and I would love to see more chapters on Ben and Mary Beth. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Sidney43Sidney43almost 12 years ago

A really nice, well written romance story. I did note one error and that was just after she shed her robe to stand naked before him, a few paragraphs later he undressed her????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
minor nitpick

NYCFD should be FDNY.

northlandernorthlanderalmost 12 years ago
An Excellent Love Story

An exellent story, showing that love may come at any time of life and also that our towers of religious strength may also have feet of clay. Congratulations, well worth the read

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Tugs At Your Heartstrings

Wonderful love story. Tremendous way to finally find your soulmate. Excellent.

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