All Comments on 'I Spy On My Stepsister'

MORE PLEASE. Haven’t read a story like this before. Keep up the good work.

Thanks Parkrite, I'm glad you liked my story. I've got a few stories with similar themes that you might like if you wanted to check them out. Secret Sex With My Stepdaughter would come pretty close to this one.

I really wanted to like it. Good premise. But I got BORED. Show, don’t tell. You’ve written a lot of stories but most are not highly rated. This may be why. I don’t know, haven’t read them

You ruined it with the incest. Too much period talk.

Other than the mis-categorizing - probably should have been fetish - well done. 5 stars. I would love to see a sequel where they fuck at the end of her period but mis-time it and she gets pregnant...

Too long story but good

This is written somewhat up on another level from the other stories of yours that I've read. Nice pace, not in too much of a rush to get to the action. Well done, and you can go further into toilet games in a sequel.

Great as usual, even better than usual.

That was brilliant. Only personal preference but I’d have enjoyed some better scat content. Perhaps it could have covered her going for her morning poop the following day after and they adopt a new dynamic if you know what I mean 😉

Wonderful story. Great writer. Thanks.

Awesome story !! Wish there was more to this fantastic story !!

This was a very charming story. Didn't expect proud Jade to enjoy getting down and dirty. Great account of bodily functions.

Hi Susan - thanks for taking the time to read my story and comment on it, I am pleased you liked it. If you liked the themes in this story, some others of mine you might want to try are 'Exploring With My Big Brother' and 'Secret Sex With My Stepdaughter'