All Comments on 'I Spy With My Electronic Eye'

Great story. I would've liked for you to throw in some anal since David was really obsessed with his mom's ass. Aside from that, you could flesh out the story some more but as it is, it's a very good story.

Keep it up.

very exciting

FANTASTIC..... What more can I say, I would like to see more chapters added to this story. I agree some anal and let the women take his anal cherry!!!

Paul

Time passes and both Mom and Amy become pregnant at the same time.

Where does it go from here ?

Good story but a little too rushed at the end where the three get together.

I liked the story, but it ended too fast. I can relate to this story, I used to stand outside my sisters window and watch her towel off from the shower and lay on her bed and begin fingering her pussy. One night, it was myself and her alone, my parents were gone for the night and I had gone into my room, and she came in telling me that she knew I watched her, and if I didnt fuck her, she'd snitch on me! mind you I was 20 and she was 17. So I fucked her, and I still fuck her to this day!

thats very nice attempt. i like incest stories especially and that was one of them. i masturbated twice during reading. i also like sex chatting so if any boy, girl, aunt, sister, niece want to chat about sex they r welcome.they can mail me on:behankayar@yahoo.com

Storyline has potential, but story too rushed and inconsistent. Posibly better if Amy and mum had a chapter each to develop character then another for threesome.

Maybe I am just too picky.

Katlyn

Just an adolesent fantasy

there needs to be more surprise, shock, embarrassment and indecision also anger.

he is NOT

Did. You get lazy or what? Spend some time with the threesome damn.

Well, this is an older story that I just come across. I liked it a lot. Of course both his sister and mother gave in far to quickly for it to be realistic, it was still a very good read. As some commenters said, the ending was too fast.