All Comments on 'I Strike Out but Mom Scored'

Dumb. Are there any stories where the mom isn't the hottest thing walking?

***Thanks for the short read are you going to finish the story?

It’s a decent scene but not a story. It could be good but where is it going?

So in division to my earlier statement: apparently Siri only decided to show me part of the story. I had ended on him looking back waving. So having read the whole story, yep it’s not just one scene. Not much of a character arc, no real change. It’s a good opening act for sure. And the writing is good. I’d read more if more existed. Keep it up.