All Comments on 'I Submit Ch. 03'

I think glen will slowly be eased out of the sex with his wife. her pussy is already her bosses, and glen is just the waiter.

Gary

This is a great story! This chapter is by far the best, however all were very good. I'm looking forward to more chapters. However, I would like to see Glen take less of a wimp role.

I thunk those trolls that are complaining about your story are Cuckolds themselves, hahaha.

I hope this is real had a hard cock reading all of it. Keep up the work, your really wondeful.

To Hell with those idiots that cannot enjoy how wonderful it is to share.

A wonderfully erotic story that has me wanting more. That's the sign of a fine writer. Thanks for sharing your talent.

have her husband shave her pussy for her boss

You kept me so sensually tense through the whole story that I feel exhausted now that I've finished reading it.

So erotic Jen.

Your admirer,

Nesher

As an erotic story - pretty hot. I liked her thoughts about wanting it and that it was "arranged". And the hubby's enjoyment - good move.

As a writer - there are some typos that were a bit of a distraction. There are a few places too that you could think about visuals and sensations. Give us something to help us visualize you, and him. And give us something to let us feel (as a first person narrator) what it felt like.

Did that really happen or is it just fiction? I'd love to have a wife like that. My wife used to be like that but things changed.

She would give him a comparable experience?

3 part story I have ever read. I could not stop reainf them until I finished them all

Hot.

Stupid,inept,perverted. "1" !

This was one hot and sexy story. Will there be a part 4 with Mike and Glen?

He has been banned ?....Why.? Anyone know.

Strange but I didn't enjoy it at the beginning. Then after reading the complete story and thinking about it. I did. I think because it is different. Normally the wife betrayed the house. Or the husband is left at home waiting. This time he joined in. I am not that type of guy. But some of my friends are and they are very happy. I hope you do more in this story and let them enjoy there adventure together. Let Mike guide glen in to new pleasure with his wife.