All Comments on 'I Think You Are Man Enough'

PLEASE learn how to use the word "too". It made a decent story very distracting.

"Aunt Ave had a strong hot shower and she no doubt had some superb apple pie awaiting some cream."

I never read a story where the author cannot get the verbs to lay and to lie correct

The 'too' was very distracting! I nearly gave up on the story!

And it is 'knew', not 'new'.

If this tale does not convince some young man to leave his phone at home when visiting friends of the family I despair. What treasures these women are, who will give you a start in life. I would never betray them, as so many do and then have the cheek to claim that they have been traumatised and their lives, ruined.