by ErrantWayfarer
If this tale does not convince some young man to leave his phone at home when visiting friends of the family I despair. What treasures these women are, who will give you a start in life. I would never betray them, as so many do and then have the cheek to claim that they have been traumatised and their lives, ruined.
The 'too' was very distracting! I nearly gave up on the story!
And it is 'knew', not 'new'.
I never read a story where the author cannot get the verbs to lay and to lie correct
"Aunt Ave had a strong hot shower and she no doubt had some superb apple pie awaiting some cream."
PLEASE learn how to use the word "too". It made a decent story very distracting.