All Comments on 'I Waited for Lara'

For the read.

Hope you have some more of Jim and Lara

Just like many stories this is so far fetched.

The innocent, young girl that knows nothing about sex, suddenly becomes the greatest cock sucker on earth. I can assure you that’s not how it happens.

Little confused about her age when she started working for Daddy Jim (almost twenty?), but that's a minor point.

This was a lovely story of old/young love and their growing sexual attraction to each other. If she's younger than his youngest son, Daddy Jim must be a lot older than her, and at the age when men need young pussy to keep them motivated. Before she knows it old Daddy Jim will have her pregnant if she's not careful.

I beg to differ . . . I think for a lot of women cock-sucking is something that comes naturally. The skill just needs to be nurtured, but if the girl/woman is willing and wants to please her man, even if not experienced sexually, if the man is patient, and communicates what he likes, how she should do it and gives her encouragement, you might be surprised by those first efforts. Cock-sucking a deserving man is always a pleasure whether she can do it "right" the first time or not

Not paying attention? She was sexually molested by her brother repeatedly, so to say she knows nothing about sex is stupid. And we know that he fucked her the last time she tolerated it, but she might have been forced into oral previously. Are you one of those critics that can't wait to criticize what you yourself can't do, or just a lousy reader?

ruly dreadful way of thinking about a young woman. No better than the brother.

Lovely tender story

Hate to disagree with some commenters, but fellatio by the female is a normal part of the mammal sex repertoire. Females licking the genitalia of the male suitor prior to coition happens in many species, including humans. And as a male recipient, makes me glad to be a mammal. However, one hopes it only happens among human in the appropriate circumstances: consenting adults.