All Comments on 'I Waited Twenty Years Ch. 03'

by LynnGKS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Too much for me.

Lars is a mean-spirited predator. His attitude toward the old "bitches" is, in a nutshell, like the attitude of conscienceless used car salesmen toward needy customers who can't help themselves. And even worse than the salesmen, he smirks and laughs and calls them all "bitches" (or worse) repeatedly and obviously without regret. I don't like his cynical selfishness at all. Should I? If you tell me that is what they want, I will say that's all the more reason for me to think his behavior is inexcusably exploitative. He seems to claim some sort of affection for Kristen, but I am not convinced. She's just a convenient repeater that he wants to keep around for use during slow periods with the guests. I know it's a story, but I do prefer to find someone I can like.

LynnGKSLynnGKSover 12 years agoAuthor
I wrote Lars that way

Keep reading and you'll see why.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Late to the polls.

I couldn't get the voting machine to count my ballot before. I don't like Lars, but the story is good and well written. It deserves a good score.

Hornydevil47Hornydevil4710 months ago

Looks like I am 12 years late reading this. I agree that the Lars character is at the moment not nicely portrayed. If he was treating my wife like that I would definitely not be happy even though we play. Let's see where you go with this old story. By the way, thanks for your stories. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

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