All Comments on 'I Want You to Seduce My Husband Ch. 13'

Evenwith my ED this got me hard. The perfect mix of filth and evil spiced with hot sex. You have a gift. This is erotic with a capital "E"!

R.

Was hoping for a scene with the secretary, and you did not disappoint. Great scene!

I have wanted a story with the hot Latina from the baseball field since the beginning. Can’t wait for the next one!

Just curious.

when is the next story coming out? great reading so far!

No "release schedule" -- if I were that disciplined, I would be selling them!

Sorry for the long gap after #13. I took a nice little vacation from work and writing. Back at both now. Chapter 14 rough draft is done, going through my first run edits tomorrow. Hope to publish by Tuesday.

I'd like to see scott and the redhead together. Maybe Scott and shelly having sex next to his sleeping wife

This Tuesday? XD

What a great way of ending it! Sexy, gorgeous Shelly seducing Alice who I hoped would get a shot....sexy, HOT fucking, kissing..which I love doing....it was awesome! I look forward to more from you in the future!

It's been 3 months, and I'm still checking at least once a week!

Please post soon!

I check everyday please update

Still hoping you haven't forgotten this story. This chapter was the best yet.

Are you planning on finishing this story or you finished with it?

Been checking since July, was an avid follower. Any new chapters?

I’m a latecomer to this series and am really loving it. I love Scott and while I feel he caved in a bit quickly at the beginning the stories have been really hot. I’m not entirely sure he should stay with Madeline but I really hope he doesn’t fall in love with Shelley she’s a slut and a conniving bitch, however hot she is.

I find your series interesting in that it portrays its two main female characters as either dumb and easily manipulated or coniving and scheming. Apart from that the erotica content of your series is the usual gymnastic merrygoround of using as many cocks in as many holes as possible. And not one of those cocks is sheathed in a condom. I have no idea where you anticipate the direction of this series...nor do you I suspect since it has been some time since you submitted the next installment. The sex scenes for me as a reader become very very boring as there are only so many things humans can do with the respective genitalia. It all seems very "samey" after the umpteenth fuck or suck. It's the same as porn that becomes boring after a while of repetition

Almost a year to the day since the last update and I still check in regularly to see if anything has been added. Fingers crossed you decide to return to this at some point

Hope the author is okey.

This is the first story on here where I have skimmed past the sex scenes. This story had promise - but no storyline eventuated. There was potential for so much here. For example, I would have loved to see Shelly get her just deserts for what she's done, for her 'BFF' to see what she is really like and perhaps come up with a sneaky plan for revenge. And for Scott to truly put an end to the affair, see her for what she is, and rekindle his marriage. But it just became more fragmented as it went along and became a vehicle for, 'Ooh, another sex scene!' Nah. It seems even the author is over it.

Honestly perplexed that COVID happened and you didn't wind up at least running this story to a conclusion.

What a bunch of cheating trash. Then you had to bring in the bbc on the wedding day. Didn't see anything BWC. Plus the story was way to long.

Well, thanks for nothing. But, to be honest, you put yourself in a spot where you really had no where to go with this. Soooooop much shit happened in only a handful of days. But you really lost me when Eric and Dave showed up at her house. That whole scenario was just dumb! I mean really, having committed her first ever adulterous act the night before with 2 strangers. What wife wouldn’t end up fucking both in her marital bed. Let’s not forget the cheating husband that doesn’t notice a strange car at his house in the middle of the day while driving to fuck his mistress. No husband would want to look at their own house to make sure the wife wasn’t outside or something like that. Lol. You can’t end the story because you drove it into the ground with nowhere to go. Lol

Finally Scott is getting more! I do hope Shelly is honest with him soon .-. I started liking this story from the beginning because she point blank told him what was happening and seduced him that way :D I don't even mind that she is trying to drive a wedge between them to get Scott, as long as he doesn't continue to lag behind what Maddie is getting, he needs more love too. And Alice sounds adorable as heck, and hot. I want more of her <3

im sorry but this was utter trash

First: if Shelley weren't such a cartoon, she'd be someone you'd delight in taking down several pegs: a completely narcissistic bitch who'd probably lose it if she were ever told "no". And what about the ten year old boy Tommy? Neither parent seemed to spare him a thought to speak of.

Both couples are people on whom you'd love to unleash the most vindictive auditors in the employment of the IRS.

the series was really strong in the beginning but then i felt like the plot started to get lost...we got some character development with maddy but the series eventually became all about sex. i was excited to see scott wanting to put an end to it, i wanted to see maddy and scott confront each other or find out about each other's trysts and see where that drama leads to (obviously maddy isnt happy with scott anymore). or i wanted to see shelly actually take scott for herself and see how that pans out

Please more chapters.