All Comments on 'I Will Gladly Fuck You'

loved it good one keep up the wet story writing

When will people learn that Spellcheck is not the same as proofreading? Not a bad stroker, but there are enough spelling errors to irk the reader. When in doubt a word is correct, use the dictionary! Example: "shone" is the past tense of "shine." As you intended to use it, "glisten" is the synonym. "Shown" is the past tense of "to show," with the synonym being "demonstrated." See what I mean?

Next time, read proof on your story before you submit it and you will get better ratings. A judicious use of adjectives and a tad more detail on your characters would not hurt, either. Keep trying.