All Comments on 'I Will Never Be Loved Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Anxious for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting set-up

Looking forward to more.

fanfarefanfareover 8 years ago
short but subtle

Sl2, I would guess that when you originally wrote this, you intended to methodically reveal a young woman's psychological development? Each chapter shows us a different facet of Danielle's persona.

MrDonNottyMrDonNottyover 8 years ago

Awesome story can u post em faster

ariesgirlariesgirlover 8 years ago

At some point Danielle will come around once she figure out her family isn't out to hirt her.

Can't she attend school where she is currently living? It seems like it might be more beneficial since she wouldn't have to worry about housing and food if there is a school close by.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Short but sweet!

Please update more. I know she is a work in progress but I love it. I can't wait until her heart opens up for true love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting

interesting story...just when you really get into it...it's over

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting story

I'm really enjoying this story and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 8 years ago
Love your writing!

I am interested in reading more from you!!!! I like this so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5 stars

Love it!!! Just wish it was a little longer but oh well haha. Really want to know who Luke is. He lives at the house so he must be very close to the family. Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I WANT MORE!!

Im already in love with this story can you tell me what other sight is on so I can go there and read it there too cause I just read all 3 chapters over and over again PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I love this story so much! 5 Stars!!!!

Yes the chapters are short but that's what makes them so damn good. I mean each chapter leaves me wanting more then the last one did. I have reread each chapter like ten times because I love this story so much. It's a lot different then other stories on here and that's why I love it so much. It's a story that leaves me constantly wanting more. So could you please update like now! I am like an addict, I need more of your amazing work!

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