All Comments on 'I Won't Look'

This was a fun little story. Very plausible.

Ahhh, the illicit viewing affair... or is it? Thank you.

A fun read, but not hot.

Bill S.

Peeping Thomasina, oh my! Well that should make for an interesting conversation next time she talks to Bobby. Very enjoyable stroke story, good plot and execution. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

As in Beth's Mom, more chapters please.

G

Well written, cute story. Hoping for a sequel! Voted five.

I think this is a similar story that needs more chapters now.

Brilliant story very well written thank you.

Rolling On Floor Laughing My Ass Off~!!!!

👍👍

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Eh...

As good as they get, from a woman's point of view....

the sauce on this cupcake is getting caught naked, with camera, open window, by TWO girls. Sets the stage for a great Chapter 2...or 2 and 3 !

That's IT

MORE

THERE HAST TO BE MORE!!!!

No, no, it doesn't need more.......but if there is more, well the daughter needs to be 18 as well, right?

Frankly, I have a real short one like that I did for Erotic Fantascenes here on Lit about a woman watching the young man mowing his back yard and then washing off. Sometimes a quick short little scene like this is perfect!

no pun intended haha but don't leave us hanging Chunks!

This needs more than just 1 page.

it was just about to get good!

That was naughty and there is no sequel, that's why you only received a 3.

REgards

A mostly amusing story. A nice break from the usual fair and with just the right amount of twist in it to make for a fun, albeit short, read.

Mommy got busted! Good story, I would have loved to hear how her daughter and friend reacted but since they were underage I understand.

Don't usually go for the exhibitionist stories but this one is fun.

This is really well written and I found it close enough to believable to be very erotic. Great subject. Thanks for sharing.

This is a wonderful story about getting caught! It is well written and opens up for the possibility of much more action. I hope the story continues.

What, are you saying that everybody doesn't cum that much every time?

LOL, it's a C O M E D Y...

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...in other genres, like action or suspense. Unfortunately, in erotica they are just a way of torturing your readers, unless you post all the chapters together. So PLEASE hurry with the next ten or twelve chapters!

Fun story,thanks, could be another part or more.