All Comments on 'Ian and Wes Pt. 01'

Great build-up, really good writing. Can’t wait to read more about these two.

Love Ian's "voice" and the sarcy relationships with his family. We readers could see Wes's interest before Ian so the build-up was great. Splashed a great load, thanks.

Very well crafted! Great characterization and build up! Hoping for lots more!

My new favorite story, thank you so much and please give us more!

Wes is certainly one very sexually gifted young man! He surely has grown some since leaving freshman year. He has the dark hair, the five o'clock shadow, the hair on his arms and legs -- at some point in Wes' bedroom, does Ian get to remove Wes' shirt? He should have dark chest hair on that sexy muscular chest. Please write more -- and give them details and descriptions! Wes' body sounds like a beautiful sight to see!

You're a terrific story teller! Really enjoying this and looking forward to seeing how it unfolds.

Like damnnnn give me more

Ugh. I want more. Their relationship is so good. Please keep writing.

Loved it. Rock hard. Just saying ...

God yes, amazing build up!

Sensational!!

Absolutely one of the best I've read here, and cleverly written. Thanks!

The amount of times I read his name as "Whitney Houston"...... 😂

Love the writing and these guys, just awesome 😎

I like this story

Didn't rate this chapter when I started reading the series. READ IT! Read it all. Some of the finest writing on Lit right here. Thank you Gar28 for the ride. Amazing.

The sexual tension between the two at first was everything I want. I am fully in love with this story.

I love a well-written story that can mix humor with eroticism. Bravo!

this is the best story on this damn website holy shit you're good at writing

This for me was just the apex of your writing.

"But even if physically speaking he was basically a god among men, I had come to realize that Wes was just that—just a man. He had wants, hopes, and fears, just like anyone else. And sometimes he did the wrong thing, or said the wrong thing.

He was imperfect.

And so was I.

And I loved him all the more for it."

While this may be a work of fiction, your writing made this a reality I want to have. Thank you for sharing this possibility!