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All Comments on 'IaW Ch. 01: In a World'

by Wilson Spalding

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hotmetalmanhotmetalmanabout 4 years ago
Intrigued

Well-written setup of a couple of interesting people. Looking forward to seeing where you take them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hmmmm.

Breezy style but aren't they too familiar for having just met? If a romantic relationship develops that quickly, I'd be concerned one or the other was after something more than a romantic relationship. And why the gratuitous swearing? Post in LW, get some feedback, and take your lumps. Don't worry about the haters.

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