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All Comments on 'IaW Ch. 04: Sunday in the Parking Lot'

by Wilson Spalding

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robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Understanding

Making sense of this would require my reading the preceding chapters. I can't do that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wire Walking!

You have a great story line going and it is hot as hell. Against all odds, this couple has successfully walked the wire together, in forming this relationship.

We hope it continues to deepen, as more stuff is unpacked, and the relationship hopefully stabilizes. Both, in life and love, there are no safety nets.

Keep the chapters coming! Thanks!

patilliepatillieabout 4 years ago
Good, smart writing

the dialogue is very well done,and as another commentator said you are walking the wire between hotwifing and cucky. i am interested in more.

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