All Comments on 'Ibiza Wars'

Great job of creating characters with no redeeming qualities

Lies and counter lies

Not much of story. But the last sentence killed it. It assumed she will go to Ibiza with female friends and fuck around. So if that id the case then hubby gets to fuck around too. Who knows maybe the writer will turn this couple into a of swingers.

Blah, blah, blah. Same story over and over again. Do new LW writers have no imagination at all?

So Kardashian, next stop who knows.

Just another shit story about a vile selfish disgusting woman whom thinks her shit don't stink

Giving the guy a blowjob was cheating, she me people may argue but scre them. She cheated and lied. He’d cheated and confessed and they cheated together on his old girlfriend. Not much future for this couple of ‘love birds’

And to add to it despite loving him she’s planning to do it again.

What was this? To read this is a complete waste of time...1*

I liked it - but then I don't insist that any woman who even considers cheating - on a cheating boyfriend - should be sent to the same circle of hell as does the wife of a loyal husband mother of his children who cheats persistently and lies to him about it

I see these stories as miniatures of my own life and fantasy. They are not meant for your wanking. If you don't like that, just sod off.

Peoples this is a fantasy story , as the author points out , so why get so defensive over morals and butt hurt over principles??? Again FANTASY , besides who died and made you people the ‘ Principle Police of Published Porn ‘ ??? Common taters are like onions , just a growing veggie , until someone uproots them , then they get all steamed up and boil over . I say “let em simmer and stew until somebody stirs em up and sticks their meat to em “!!! Yeah chew on that awhile !!! Good story worth a 5 and an applause for stirring the pot of protesters

Not very readable....it's like you were just stating facts instead of telling a story! *2* Keep trying...

My favourite of your stories, reads so naturally and is so believable. Very hot!

Great story!