All Comments on 'Ice and Fire Ch. 01'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 3 years ago
Wonderful start

To a lovely story. Just took a glance at the tags, and they do bring a smile to my face. If you're going to do something, you should do it right. And Paladin v Succubus should have some romance in it. ^.^ It also seems like, the demoness is the inexperienced one in this, which is a lovely twist.

Looking forward to more. Take all the time you need, Be well.

SmutolSmutolover 3 years ago

No male heroes. That is a bummer for me. Still its nice to see Ur back

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is great!

Cant wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The legend has returned

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Welcome back, Legend!

This is hot. thankyou. Can't wait for the next straight shota tales from you, master :D

Cuthcavs55Cuthcavs55over 3 years ago

The return of the king

skippersdadskippersdad3 months ago

That was Wonderful.

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Back in the game writing monstergirl, fantasy and sci-fi stories. My favourite themes are gentle femdom (think valiant female knights rescuing young men in distress!), yuri (Japanese-style romanticised lesbian fiction) and older-woman, younger-man relationships. I hope you enj...

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