All Comments on 'Ice and Fire Ch. 02'

Very good. Need more please lol please don't let this be the end......

What a dilemma at the end! For a second I thought this was going to have a sad ending haha. It's good to see that their love prevailed <3

It is so good to have a new story from you. I hope there are more chapters. Thanks.

(Starcraft's Vulture voice) Oh... Is that it?

The story was sweet - maybe too short. No, not maybe. It was too short. I expected something drawn out, like the Sentimental Succubus, with knight & demoness going to hell and giving it some hell. It was sweet nevertheless. So glad you've returned!

After reading other comments, I know I am not alone if I ask more chapters .

The story is beatifull and surely can breed more chapters

Excellent work anyway

Another great story !

You never Disappoint, Thank you.