by RogueAlan
Your Story captured my imagination, I became enthralled by the way you interspersed a possible 'finality' for Taylor Polk, with a hope that he could eventually survive, through the mysterious intervention of what turned out to be a 'spirit' manifestation. I really enjoyed reading your Story, and look forward to your next.
My thanks to you.
Very well written, balanced a good story with erotica. Thank you
I really enjoyed this! I found the story erotic and suspenseful. The medical details were an added treat. Thanks!
It was well written, but the sex seemed out of place. It seemed like a non-erotic story with the sex thrown in as an afterthought.