All Comments on 'ICU Angel'

by RogueAlan

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bryanforbryanforover 13 years ago
A Fascinating Story

Your Story captured my imagination, I became enthralled by the way you interspersed a possible 'finality' for Taylor Polk, with a hope that he could eventually survive, through the mysterious intervention of what turned out to be a 'spirit' manifestation. I really enjoyed reading your Story, and look forward to your next.

My thanks to you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well done!

Very well written, balanced a good story with erotica. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well told.

A beautiful story. Very well told.

talismaniatalismaniaover 13 years ago

I really enjoyed this! I found the story erotic and suspenseful. The medical details were an added treat. Thanks!

AlwaysHungryAlwaysHungryover 13 years ago
Odd.

It was well written, but the sex seemed out of place. It seemed like a non-erotic story with the sex thrown in as an afterthought.

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