All Comments on 'Identity Crisis 09'

I loved this story. Just wish it could have been a little longer. Hope to read more of your stuff.

I have plenty of ideas for stories, just that my grammar makes it hard for me to express myself sometimes. :(

I will be working on shorter single stories next (7.5k to 10k words minimum). Comments are welcome on ways to improve. If I'm not good at certain areas, let me know. Cheers!

Short and simple sounds great, looking forward to anything new you write. Remember the two greatest ways to becoming a better writer are: keep reading and keep writing!

I loved the whole series it made me wonder if I would have been able to make it threw the school. Good why was I born a man.

Continue writing please

great story!

I can't believe it took u 9 chapters and that's all we get waste of time

I like the writing style and the story but the ending is a cop out and feels forced