All Comments on 'Idiot's Guide to Your First Love Ch. 02'

by PomegranateGoddess

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HornyViginAngelHornyViginAngelalmost 5 years ago
More.

He needs to beg forgiveness at his knees for hurting her. Also his betrayal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Please continue

I love the way you drew out the story. Patiently waiting for chapter three.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WTF

There’s a difference between lust and obsession. Clearly the dad is just obsessed, stalking her, beating her date unconscious and not even checking if the guy is alright, being cruel to her for wanting to live her life, demanding she doesn’t date yet kissing her and making her want him more like hypocrite much????? Also if you’re going to state she’s not wearing panties under her skirt, don’t write he took off my panties a mere chapter later. This store isn’t love, it’s lust from her and obsession from him

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

PG,

Bravo!! Between you and me, I would disregard any negative feedback from someone named anonymous. Apparently they suffer from identity issues, and have no appreciation for a fantastic storyline. When they respond in that manner to your obvious writing skills, remember to ask them how much they paid to read it. I guess the price of admission left them wanting. What a shame. See you in the next issue. TTFN

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love your work, the pace kept me wonderfully wet. For your readers this is a fanciful sexual spin that hopefully leads to some messy sheets. I surrender to my father 3 years ago and no, I’m in my thirties, so I don’t meet the criteria for the young virgin. My earliest sexual memory is watching my mother perform oral sex on my father when I was still in high school. His nude body was so beautiful setting back in the chair. My mother on her knees in front of him working her hands up and down his cock. Watching her take part of him in her mouth as she moved him in and out, her head bobbing up and down. Oh fuck, I’m so wet, I have no idea why I do this to myself, reading your work and remembering the last time my father’s cock was inside me. Three years ago he told me about this site and when my mom was out of the house he ask me which stories I enjoyed. At that moment, I told the truth, incest. My surrender to my father was complete, my reward has been the best sex of my life.

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