All Comments on 'If I Had the Words'

For writing a story about Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet. I have to go now and stick my dagger in my Juliet

Story was Exceptional well, but there were words as "Love". so why mess it up in the end by getting a other guy in it?

This was very well written. I loved it. Thanks.

I loved the story and the Romeo and Juliet thing was great. I wanted to give it five stars but I just couldn't get over him going from not knowing anything about the play to reciting the lines perfectly and with hesitation in a matter of seconds without even looking at the book she gave him.

Because it shows he truly loves his mother by giving her a chance with the one she never forgot.

An entertaining twist on the Romeo and Juliet story, although Shakespeare himself came down pretty hard against incest (Hamlet, Pericles).

his teacher and mom had the same feelings for each other.

if you love them set them free, what is meant to be, will be

I think you should continue the story with Romeo and Juliet

I honestly had no idea where this story was going from the first few paragraphs but you brought it around nicely. Hope Lit doesn’t get sued for royalties from the estate of the late WSS!

Whether this story continues or not, that was an absolutely BRILLIANT ending. Fantastic story all around, too.

somebody showed some talent here. well done.

Can't wait to enjoy more of your work...

I loved the end ... thanks for sharing. Shakespeare in this family will be remembered for a very long time because it is such a brilliant play but because of its significance in this family! You brought all the elements together in a very good told tale! 5-Stars!!!

I would like to say you had a nice twist on this. Most young men would not give up there mother so easy knowing how much they love her.

OHHHHH MYGHADDD. THIS IS THE SHIT. FCK I CAME HERE FOR THE EROTICA AND TABOO AND WHAT U DO IS MAKE ME CRY? i love u.

Fantastic, what next? Othello?

Another fantastic tale from Charlene, if only you could write all of these. You certainly rise above the dross