All Comments on 'If Things Had Been Different Ch. 06'

First of all, thank you for the new chapter! Love the story, but the updates have been few and far between. Hopefully that changes?

You’re maneuvering Michelle and Julie together, which is sort of weird, but at the same time it feels “right.” Fate never worked between Julie and Sarah being together permanently, but perhaps Julie and the next being thing to Sarah?

Surely Julie is at the age of getting out of the spy business (or whatever she does) and looking to settle down.

The age difference would be daunting, but not insurmountable. Would Sarah let Julie go in this situation?

Please don’t let us wait too long to find out!

The story of Julie and Sarah has always been a beautiful one, with life and circumstances keeping them apart. Julie getting with Michelle would just be hurtful for Sarah. If she truly loves or loved Sarah, she wouldn't ever even consider it.

I have loved these stories, but I really hope you don't go there.

I agree with Anonymous (please don't).

Just use this as a stand alone story to enhance the story of Sarah and Julie.

So, as I suspected. Julie is akin to Villanelle but on the side of the angels (if there are such creatures in the underworld of Intelligence). I would question the likelihood of a hitman (hitgirl, hitperson?) taking a 'civilian' on a mission but it's only a story and an enjoyable five-star one at that. Can we take it that the saga continues, Shady?

............ if Julie gets together with Michelle you would destroy an otherwise excellent serial.

It would totally wreck the whole underlying premise that however "hidden" Julies love and protection had been for Sarah and her protective promise towards Michelle at the Christening.

That would just be a step too far ................ and anyway, Julies character (carefully built) would find a way to let the young woman down easily, after all, she has spent almost her entire adult life in love with Michelles mother.

Wonderful, almost bizarre tale of love out of your fertile imagination. Not sure where you will take your readers, though ending to this chapter points to a relationship that is tad unsettling - unsettling because of how much Sarah and Julie love one another and the daughter twist doesn’t resonate. Regardless, love your work.

loved the series but the "spy" thing is a bit OTT but i can see that the story can continue with love as now that Sarah knows that her daughter has lesbian feelings it could follow through that she would wish for her to be helped in that direction by someone that would be very gentle and loving to her daughter "ie" Julie.

It could also lead into family incest between them and possibly others,there is a lot that could then involve in another series.

Surely not the end for our heroines? Such interesting vistas could lie ahead xxxxx

Noo don't let Julie with the daughter...

I'm sorry to say, this chapter makes it even clear what a trivial relationship Sarah and Julie have. Sex for one weekend per year. That's not a relationship. And especially this stupid adventure that, one shotgun shell more, would have killed Sarah. What kind of a conceited moron secret agent takes someone on a kill mission with them and *then* does even tell them enough to convince them to stay in the damned van?

Jane Bond, she ain't.

I'll save the last chapter for some other lifetime.