All Comments on 'If You Have To... Ch. 04'

Good writing. I like the story overall but most of James and Eve's interactions make James seem like a needy whiney child instead of an 18 year old witch I don't like

I enjoyed this! Very hot! I do wish she hadn't broken up with the husband though. Only because the iilicit, clandestine nature of their incestual affair made it even hotter to me. But still excited for the next chapter.

Sorry, 2 star. I believ e it is time to wrap this one up.WAY, too repetitious.

Lord that was hot!

Either she wants to get pregnant or she doesn't. My assumption was with her husband out of the way, she would get on birth control and let herself go. You need to have her make up mind.

And he didn’t lick her pussy once!

However, I enjoyed the story. Thank you.

Fantastic story. Keep writing PLEASE.

I'm not usually a big fan of impregnation stories, but you're really managing to make me enjoy that theme here ... maybe because you've done such a good job teasing out Eve's struggle with her own repression. Very sexy and fun -- I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Without a doubt the hottest story line I’ve read here. I have re-read each part to keep up with the development. If you wanted somebody to read your new parts before submitting I would volunteer.

So brilliantly depraved. Awesome. Can’t wait to read the rest. Thank you

Great. Is there more?

Hi! Enjoying this story! Hoping you will continue!

10/10

To be continued ?? When ??

Please let us know if this story will be continued in the near future. I've been checking back but will stop doing so if not. Thanks.

I'm not into incest but the different forms of teasing you've written, all the "will they won't they" for both him penetrating her and him cumming inside is exactly my cup of tea. I wish it wasn't incest so I could show my boyfriend. But then again I get it because if it wasn't incest, cheating, or some religious conviction, why wouldn't they just do whatever they want without trying so hard to hold onto plausible deniability.

Love it. Whens part 5?

SUPER HOT story!!!!! Congratulations!!!

LOVE THE STORY JUST THAT FUCKIN KID GITS ON MY FUCKING NERVES WITH ALL THAT FUCKIN IM SORRY SHIT FUCK I WOULD OF BITCH SLAP HIS BITCH ASS

Look before I say more I am engrossed in this story planning to read all the sequels. With that said this kid sounds like a 13 or 14 year old. I was naive at 18 but not as bad as the kid in the story.

However this story turns me on. *****