All Comments on 'If You Leave'

LOL Well, once again I'm very impressed; this is delightfully playful and erotic, and, running beneath the tongue-in-cheek surface is a rather interesting philosophical puzzle, which Charlotte does a pretty good job of running her (softened up!) brain through before succumbing. --I'm rather curious as to where suggestibility ended and the power of implanted suggestions began myself. --Or was he just teasing?! Poor Charlotte, I hope she'll be very well tended-to now!

Another wonderful addition to your thriving oeuvre

What a great story! Thoroughly arousing, but most of your writing is...

I can barely breathe after touching myself and waiting until he gave into her to cum. Your writing is truly amazing and I wish I was her.

I read the first 4 paragraphs and couldn't understand what the heck Jukebox was trying to say! Not wasting more time trying to descramble his jumbled up writing...A 2 just for the effort!